Final draft

Second draft

Firsr draft of writing assessment

     Throughout all the progresses in this project, my skills improved a lot in designing and creating publicities. Besides, I discovered some others technical programs and learnt some objectives such as running a business using RCT3, giving feedback to enhance myself and applying the Design Cycle. All the processes in Design Cycle were run through during I edited my work and my models also got its purpose, which was modeling variables, using Goal Seek and predicting the results as a profit or a loss.
     All my works were pretty good in attracting right audiences including children, families and teenagers. To make sure I attracted right audiences, I divided my sections into 3 parts. The first one was Cartoon images, using to charm the children. The second was families; I used discounts and sale-off-prices to convince them to come to my park. The third was realistic and fantastic images and information appealing to teenagers. By the way, the information I put for teenagers also were the information should include. Then, all the important information and discounts already appeared on my publicities. Not only that, because of following the rubric, my works got and had all the requirements of good designs, but they still could be improved if I could redo it. To have a good design, I had time to manage and observe how to use goals to make a Good Design such as fantastic fonts, great color scheme, white spaces, simple, etc. Moreover, thanks to designing and editing poster, logo, models and leaflet, I’d learnt some new skills about using Paint.net to edit layers, evaluating my works and using Publisher to create the leaflet.
     So far, my works were completely done. All they were revised and handed in the right time. Besides, I wasn’t really frustrated because I managed my time quite well so that I wasn’t nervous if the deadline comes. In fact, my goal for all of these things I did was to get more guests come to my park and raise the income. Although I did many things but I still got benefit for myself, too. I knew how to run a Park and practicing skills. However, this was my first time for me to do it, so it’s really obvious that my park made a loss. The next time if I do it again, I would make it earn a profit by using all useful benefits I’d got.

Memorable moments at Cat Tien

During the field trip, I almost wasn’t sad because I had lots of fun with all friends and teachers. Everything went awesome and especially, the best moment left in my head and now still stay in my mind was when our group visited Ben Cu waterfall. There, shining sunlight lay everywhere and the river was splendor with volcano rocks above and below the surface. The waterfall ran from the upstream and went through the forest below. I stood up high at the upstream and saw towards the river where it ran to. Then, I mischievously jumped to the rocks in the edge of the river. The water was cool even under the hot sunshine, it made us comfortable when we surrounded, after go sightseeing for one and a half hour. After all, the instructor told us to come back to Nation Park. Nevertheless, even I was back to hostel, my mind still reserved spaces for Ben Cu waterfall. It would be one of my favorite scenario ever because it was my first waterfall I’ve ever seen.